

The stallion was proving to be a rather resilient creature, but even a demon in equine skin would die if their puppet was damaged enough. It wouldn’t have been hard, a solid stamp to the neck and Sombra would be gone in a blink. He really hadn’t expected, or even wanted, Sombra to survive and may have had half a mind to warp him back to the lair to finish him off himself.

Grogar hadn't planned for things to go the way they had, but he'd accept it. Plus, Grogar did want to kill Sombra, though he never said it out loud, but knew it would be suspicious for Sombra to just suddenly wind up dead or disappear. Either way I had not known the whole plot twist at the time I wrote that scene. The struggles of writing horses.Īs for your second bit, I absolutely like the way you think, but that chapter was posted before the finale even aired, or around when the episodes first leaked. That scene wasn't even in the original draft, words just flow from my brain and onto the document and I kept it because the thought of Starlight bopping him was funny. Even if neither of them feel anything yet.ĩ967179 There's probably some pony in History somewhere named some horse pun of Stockholm but I can only think of so many horse puns. This is supposed to be a shipping story between the two of them after all!. But eh, it's still your story, and I wouldn't know if you've planned the whole story out already or not.ĩ966937 I won't deny Sombra could use some therapy, but Starlight is simply a counselor, and I didn't want to get into a potentially uncomfortable doctor/patient romance plot. If that was actually Discord, then the motive for that would be that despite how much of a jerk he is, he would not condone shooting someone while they're down, and merely pretended to be solely doing it for pragmatic reasons.

When Chrysalis and the others learned of Sombra's survival, they all were plotting to have him killed, but Grogar was very insistent on them not doing that. Hmmmm.while I see your point, I honestly thought a previous scene in this story actually made a lot of sense if it really was Discord. Grogar and Discord are separate entities in my story, I began writing a little after the premier, Will definitively look forward to when they come into play. Does Stockholm exist in Equestria? Or would that be Trotholm or something? I dunno, I just noticed that and it seemed a bit strange Might have something to do with the fact that I actually live in Stockholm, but whatever.Īnyway, intriguing to know that Scorpan and Radiant Hope are now a part of this story. “A little Stockholm syndrome never hurt anyone,” Sombra grinned.
